Well done, the song was executed greatly. It conveyed a feeling of relaxation but also of mystery. The only thing I would improve is... just fleshing it out a bit more, make it a bit longer.
And great Crimson sample!
I was hoping someone would notice the sample.
Making it longer is something to think about...
Thanks for your review.
I love this song, I only have a couple problems. I think it got a bit to repetitive. Changing the melody up in more places would of been great. But I absolutely love the part at 1:59 - 2:35 awesome job there. The other problem I have is the claps real overpowered the other instruments and sounded a bit to generic. Next time add more Percussion the song is lacking that. it would of made it much, much better, and at the end I feel the song could of used a big climax then winded down.
For a second tune this is amazing!
Ok, Thanks for the Great Help and Advice :)
And thats my Fav Part Too xD
Awesome (As always)
Another great song Daveguy. I love the beat, the melodys everything. my only problem is that sometimes I think the bass and the beat seemed to overpower everything only a tiny bit. But that is the only thing I fond wrong about this song. Good work! :D
and Please Re - Upload the original Rainy Day I like it almost more than this one. :)
Now that is an awesome melody. Your vocals were pretty good, and the percussion was ace :)
But I just did not like the choruses. But other than that good stuff.
Nice song here, very relaxing and yes the snare is a bit over powering, and I felt you dragged out the song a bit to long. Other then that pretty good.
I really like it...
Creepy and haunting... I think that is what you were going for... and you pulled it of well! I would give this 10/10 but 1 thing really bugged me. At 0:35, that pause, well after the pause I think something should of happened after words. When I listened to that part it felt like I was really exited to go and see something... and then I saw it... and it is not as great as i thought. But as a whole this some rocks! Good job!
I didnt notice that until half a year later... damnit.
But yeah, your right... might redo this :D
I like it... but it it just sounded the same through out the whole song and like i9incher said it needs a climax it just keeps building the song has to go some where. Add more bass and this will be awesome!
please check out my new song to thanks :D
Thank you, and will surely check your new song out, then i will add a climax to the song.
I loved the instrument choice here it sounded amazing, and the way the song made me feel it mad me feel safe and warm and just a hint of worry that the food would run out. This is great. Just make it loop a bit better. Good job
I appreciate that!
Actually, it's always fun to hear what people think when they hear a piece of music. For me, I see a town far from most other civilization bustling with all sorts of farmers and blacksmiths of sorts.
Good times, good times.
First of all change up your instruments a bit more, or use them in different ways, and that voice always saying "System is down down down down the system is down" gets very annoying.
This was my first creation using FL so yea, I understand it's a bit monotone and repetitive. Just a simple song with an awesome theme.
I like it!!
I biggest plus in this song was the atmosphere, it felt like a chase scene, another awesome thing was how the song kept on building I was never bored listening to it. Good instrument choice, it flowed great, it sounded great...
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